How to revise your writing?

Question 1

Find the error: My hero is my dad he has always supported my choices and he fought in Vietnam.

Accepted Answer

run-on sentence

Question 2

What should you do with the first sentence of a paragraph?

Accepted Answer

indent

Question 3

Find the error: IN TEN YEARS, I WILL BE WORKING IN AN OFFICE AND RAISING A FAMILY.

Accepted Answer

all caps (Capitalizations rules)

Question 4

Find the error: Walking to the park ran into an old friend and talked for hours.

Accepted Answer

fragment

Question 5

Find the error: I ate my lunch at the park with a friend we had a great visit.

Accepted Answer

run-on sentence

Question 6

Find the error: i have many heroes in my life.

Accepted Answer

i should be capitalized

Question 7

Find the error: After the movie I went to the grocery store.

Accepted Answer

punctuation

Questions 7