Revising Wordiness

Vague? Bad drinks should be removed from school vending machines.

Wordy? TV networks should require shows to cast characters who are racially diverse.

Unnecessary? To be honest, homework should be eliminated from all American schools.

Wordy? Elementary schools should not allow cell phones to be brought by students.

Wordy? Courses that are online should not be offered to students below college age.

Wordy? Parent-teacher conferences would be more effective if conducted over electronic email.

Vague? People should not be allowed to play violent video games.

Wordy? Teachers should be required to obtain a renewal of their licenses every five years.

Vague? Standardized testing companies should allow students to listen to things during exams.

Vague? Increased airport security is an inconvenience that has not made passengers better.

Unnecessary? Students should not be allowed to drop out of school until age 18, I think.

Revise? The possibility exists that driverless cars present more risks than benefits.

Vague? Some children in the U.S. should have to participate in community service.

Unnecessary? Literally all high school students in the US should take courses on meditation.

Revise? It is because they are interactive that video games are the highest form of art.