Deakins STAAR 2

"After years of disrespect from your boss, bad pay, long hours… it's time that you fought back!"

Not clear, not easy to understand

"Veterinarians say that a German Shepherds are the perfect match for people with active lifestyles.”

Exercise is good for you, and will make you healthy.

"Doctors all over the world recommend this type of treatment."

put in

In order of time

Ethical appeal is the same as

Clearness, easy to understand

Facts, personal experience, information from history, information about famous people that supports your claim.

One idea per body paragraph.

piece of writing

A claim is a reason why your opinion is correct.

Scientific facts are a type of

prove

"If we don't move soon, we're all going to die! Can't you see how dangerous it would be to stay?"

mostly

Real, factual

make stand out, make more obvious, make more noticeable

A thesis statement should include reasons (claims) why your opinion is right.

Pathos is the same as

"If you're still not sure, please consider my college degree and 30 year excellent work history."

why they wrote it, why they used figurative language etc.

This is the first reason why you picked the position. Write it in different words from the thesis but the same meaning.

Oprah loves Bob’s macaroni and cheese!

Write 2-3 sentences to get the reader’s attention. A story, a fact, anything that fits with the subject of your essay.

best writing choice

I think ____________ because Claim 1 and Claim 2. Pick one side and give two reasons why your position is best.

Write the SAME ideas from the thesis but use different words

the thesis statement with a couple of repeated details

Don't be the last person on the block to have their lawn treated - you don't want to be laughed at!

Which type of appeal is most effective with many people?

Preparing for the future is more important because one can help others as well as develop a stable life for oneself.

Logos is the same as

Explain your evidence--does it show why the claim is important to the reader? Does it prove the claim is true?

show, tell

You won't find any deer along this road. In 25 years of driving the same route, I haven't seen a single one.

You'll make the right decision because you have something that not many people do: a good heart.

"The algorithms have been run in a thousand different ways, and the math continues to check out."

Focusing on the present is more important as you will worry less and be prepared for anything.

You should consider going another way if you leave later. I heard that that street is far much more dangerous at night.

change, make different

Write a sentence that tells the reader why your position is correct and important.

Everyone should exercise because it is good for your health and can help you live longer.

show

Celebrity endorsements are a type of

”As a doctor, I am qualified to tell you that this course of treatment will likely generate the best results."

The word has meaning based on the words around it

A thesis needs to include two claims.

not needed

Ethos is the same as

Strengthen an idea with proof