Read the following student submission. Indicate what the student has done wrong.

The student doesn't use their voice.

Consider the following sentence and indicate the error:

The order of the ideas is illogical and needs revision.

Consider the text below and indicate what the student has done wrong with their referencing:

The reference is not in their paragraph. We can't see source vs student.

What is the difference between revision and editing?

Revision looks at the bigger picture, editing looks at the details.

Consider the following sentence and indicate the error:

There is a spelling error in this sentence.

Consider the highlighted section below and indicate the common error that this student has made:

The student refers to "a research".

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ALDE111 - Revision & Editing (+GW)

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1
Read the following student submission. Indicate what the student has done wrong.
The student hasn't done anything wrong - their writing sticks to the rules.
The student doesn't look at "the education context" as promised.
The student's referencing style is not suitable.
The student doesn't use their voice.
2
Consider the following sentence and indicate the error:
The order of the ideas is illogical and needs revision.
The words in brackets should be separated with "and".
There are incomplete sentences.
"students" should have an apostrophe.
3
Consider the text below and indicate what the student has done wrong with their referencing:
The reference is not in their paragraph. We can't see source vs student.
The student included the authors' initials in the reference, but it's okay.
4
What is the difference between revision and editing?
Revision looks at the details, editing looks at the bigger picture.
Revision looks at the bigger picture, editing looks at the details.
There isn't a difference between revision and editing.
5
Consider the following sentence and indicate the error:
There is a spelling error in this sentence.
Revision cannot "look" at something - another word should be chosen.
There isn't an error in this sentence.
This sentence is missing important punctuation to clarify the meaning.
6
Consider the highlighted section below and indicate the common error that this student has made:
The student has not introduced their quote correctly.
The student introduces a new and different idea within the paragraph.
The student hasn't paraphrased as they should.
The student refers to "a research".
7
Consider the following sentence and indicate the error:
Learning
Won't
Their
Know
8
Consider the following sentence and indicate the error:
Schools
Two
Four
Loose

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