Sentence Structure Review

Ketchikan, a squalid city, sits on a polluted ocean next to a prison, and boy does it stink.

I love Vampire Diaries; I watch it everyday while trying to cope with my existence.

Where's the park that has the lake?

Go visit Aunt Kathy's, but do not look her in the eyes, for she has rabies.

My hobbies include gaming, writing fanfiction, and snoring.

As the time passes on, this sentence becomes more complex because it's too long, but I won't finish it until I have to.

The beast, with quiet determination, sat ready.

IC , DC

Matilda shops daily.

I hope you reconsider because there will be no seconds offers even if you beg.

Although I've never read the book.