CA 2 Review -- Writing

"Well they're going to have to work hard to get their grades up," replied the teacher.

During our spring vacation, Mom took my sister and I to Italy.

Last fall, my mom registered my entire family for a weekend retreat at a rustic Wilderness Campground near the lake.

After we cooked dinner, Dad and I had run out of wood, so we had to hunt for more.

My worst subject science, had become even more difficult.

My dog ran away. He is a white poodle.

My grandmother made my favorite pie, apple for my birthday.

It snowed there often, I had to shovel the neighbor's driveway each morning.

We lived in Montreal a city in Canada, for years, but we moved to Texas last September.

They said the course, a pathway of ropes and wires allows participants to cross an area above the ground and trees.

Jake waved at Mrs. Smith. She was his neighbor. (What's the BEST way to combine them?)

When I saw my crush Jacob, I thought, "There's the boy of my dreams!"

We had ice cream. We went after the game. (BEST way to combine?)

Jerry loved Jill, she didn't love him back. (How should we correct that sentence?)

"I'm tired of all this foolishness," shouted Mom. "your room is never clean!"

Even though the work was hard my brother and I did our best to finish.

"I don't know what to do," John sighed. "Everything in my classes overwhelm me."

His booming voice said, "Sarah Jones, my office -- now!" (What's a more effective word for "said"?)

When my Dad saw me at the baseball game, he was furious because I was supposed to be at home!

After the math test had began, the fire alarm went off.

The boa constrictor is a snake who uses it's muscles to tighten around prey, which are animals it eats.

A beautiful new Baseball Stadium, paid for by the taxpayers, sat empty all season.

"We've discussed this often," said the coach, "so you're going to show up to practice or quit the team.

Inside a Water Park, many people put on sunscreen then get in the pool.

"You're going to be in big trouble," Mom shouted, "If you don't get in here now!