Scholarly Word Choices

Simplify: We took a side trip to Florida, which is the home of Mickey Mouse.

Cut out empty/extra words: I was late due to the fact that my car would not start.

Which vague Synonym should never be used in scholarly writing? Darwin had many projects to ______ before his speech."

Eliminate the redundancies: Daniel is now employed at a private hospital working as a nurse.

Eliminate the redundancies: The single father was determined in his mind to rise above his struggles.

Which vague Synonym should you never use in scholarly writing?"Her point was _________________ clear.

Which vague Synonym should you never use in scholarly writing? "The reach of his thesis was ______________ ."

Simplify: Investigators were involved in the study of classical music.

Cut out empty/extra words: We are unable to provide funding at this time.

Which vague Synonym should you never use in scholarly writing? "The students made numerous _________________ in school."

Cut out empty/extra words: In my opinion, our current immigration policy is misguided.

Which vague Synonym should you never use in scholarly writing? "Shakespeare wrote ________________ of plays.

Simplify: There is another model that tells the story of Darwin's Evolutionary Theory.

Which vague Synonym should you never use in scholarly writing?

Which vague Synonym should you never use in scholarly writing?

Which vague Synonym should never be use in scholarly writing? "There are numerous activities to _____________

Which vague Synonym should you never use in scholarly writing? "The analysis was ______________."

Cut out empty/extra words: His third speech, was an outstanding speech.