CAE writing appropriate or inappropriate language for letter to the editor, review, report

Question 1

We are very proud to introduce our new product into the market and we promise you ultimate pleasure with wireless sound.

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inappropriate ending for report

Question 2

I hope you might reconsider the opinion expressed in your article after reading my letter.

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good end for letter to the editor

Question 3

Introduction (heading) There is no doubt that the newly released video game system of ours is an enourmous success

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inappropriate beginning for report

Question 4

Imagine being sad for some reason. You do not want to talk to anybody. However, neither do you want to stay sad...

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good sentence for review

Question 5

Dear editor: I have read your article where you argue that pop music ... In my opinion this article is way too negative.

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inappropriate start of formal letter to the editor

Question 6

As for the first point, it seems to me that the real issue is not the need for "better" teachers but, on the contrary...

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good sentence for letter or review

Question 7

Our new mobile phone was already released in our region. And it was sold out after a couple of hours.

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Changes need to be made for report language

Question 8

Imagine being sad for some reason. You do not want to talk to anybody, however, you still do not want to stay sad...

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inappropriate language for letter to the editor.

Question 9

Personally, I think pop music can have a huge impact on people's lives

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good language for formal letter

Question 10

To the editor: your latest release features an interesting article about pop music and its contributions to our lives.

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good beginning for a letter to the editor

Question 11

I am writing to express my opinion about our recently developed perfume.

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bad beginning for report

Question 12

I can highly recommend this activity to young adventurers who have no heart problems and are keen to see their lives...

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good ending for a review

Question 13

I recommend this unusual and unique sport to everyone who ........ and, oh, I almost forgot, pressure balance.

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good ending for review

Question 14

Do you know what it feels like to be in a free fall? Or how long it takes your body to fall 100 metres if ....

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good beginning for review

Question 15

Since you have a lot of readers, I would like you to go through your article once again and think about rewriting it.

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inappropriate end for a letter to the editor

Question 16

I am writing to express my opinion about our recently developed perfume.

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good sentence for formal letter

Question 17

An uplifting song can help to forget their boring life, a beautiful voice might inspire children to take singing lessons

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good sentence for a formal letter

Question 18

conclusion (heading) To sum up, our product is revolutionary and will set a new standard in phone development.

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good conclusion for report

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