Mrs Clark’s SMOAP fiction writing techniques

The teacher was a mouse

If two witches were watching two watches, which witch was watching which watch?

Her hair was like a ray of sunlight and golden as a lion's mane.

The trees danced in the wind.

She was head over heels for him.

His hands felt like ice

As she read the book a tiny tear tracked down her tender face dripping like a diamond.

The boy had brilliant blue eyes, beautiful hair and and bright red shirt.

a metaphor always uses like or as.

Her hair wrapped it's grip tight around her neck and pulled, strangling her in her sleep.

The rain poured heavily as the little girl sat miserably inside with her broken toys.

Snap! went the tree branch.