Run-Ons & Redundancy

Question 1

He had several high profile cases, John quickly became a prominent figure in legal venues.

Accepted Answer

After

Question 2

Over the years, Catherine bore him six children throughout their time together.

Accepted Answer

Delete the bolded portion

Question 3

His most enduring legacy was his separation and division of the Church of England.

Accepted Answer

his separation

Question 4

We didn't have his determination, our great country would not be the same as it is today.

Accepted Answer

Without

Question 5

Even though Mrs. Saxton made a Quiz, but everyone failed the quiz.

Accepted Answer

Kahoot,

Question 6

He was knighted because of his dedication, people today still travel to see his statue.

Accepted Answer

dedication; people

Question 7

His older brother Arthur was the heir and next in line to the throne.

Accepted Answer

the heir

Question 8

Suddenly realizing the movie was too scary for her; Mary left the theatre.

Accepted Answer

her, Mary left

Question 9

Everyone thinks I can't see them using their phones during SSR; but I can.

Accepted Answer

SSR;

Question 10

Believing that he could attract tourists to Canada, so he gathered the country's resources.

Accepted Answer

Canada,

Question 11

When Henry was 11 years old, Arthur perished fatally.

Accepted Answer

died.

Question 12

The efforts to populate the country were a dismal failure the people had no interest

Accepted Answer

failure. The people

Question 13

He was not old enough to take over the practice, however, this didn't stop the ambitious lad.

Accepted Answer

practice; however,

Question 14

Born in Scotland, John immigrated to the New Country with his parents at a very young age.

Accepted Answer

No change

Question 15

King Henry VIII is famous for his large size, for which he is popularly known.

Accepted Answer

DELETE the bolded portion

Question 16

Last Saturday, Peter was bit by a spider, after that incident he would never be the same again.

Accepted Answer

Last Saturday, Peter was bit by a spider;

Question 17

Zoe likes to ace her tests, so sometimes she studies all through the night.

Accepted Answer

no change

Question 18

This fame prompted the young man to run for a legislative seat in the Senate, he won in 1844.

Accepted Answer

Senate, which he

Questions 18