Revising and Editing (Benchmark)

Question 1

What change? Today these ancient ruins served as a shelter for a type of bird called the raven.

Accepted Answer

Change served to serve

Question 2

What change? Many familys travel during the summer and have to take off.

Accepted Answer

Change familys to families

Question 3

What change? This place tells the story of Texas. through four floors of exhibits.

Accepted Answer

Delete the period after Texas

Question 4

What change should be made? San Marcos is known for it’s rivers and parks.

Accepted Answer

Change it's to its

Question 5

What change should be made? At night the member’s of the pack pile up to sleep.

Accepted Answer

Change member's to members

Question 6

African elephants are light gray weigh about 13,000 pounds, and are around 11 feet tall.

Accepted Answer

Insert a comma after gray

Question 7

What change? It is fun to stomp your feet in this room, and hear the echo the ceiling produces.

Accepted Answer

delete the comma

Question 8

What change? With their vision, they are able to find water and flowers. in the rain forest.

Accepted Answer

Delete period after flowers

Question 9

What change? Filmmakers spent years making the movie called animal kingdom.

Accepted Answer

Change animal kingdom to Animal Kingdom

Question 10

What change? People look to explore more closer to their homes.

Accepted Answer

Delete more

Question 11

What change should be made? More then a hundred mice will come out of their homes.

Accepted Answer

Change then to than

Question 12

What change? Artifacts are there and you can listen to eyewitness accounts of battels.

Accepted Answer

Change battels to battles

Question 13

What change should be made? People come to the ruins to see the ravens and study her habits.

Accepted Answer

Change her to their

Question 14

What change? And a trip to Austin wouldn't be complete without seeing the Texas spirit theater.

Accepted Answer

Change Texas spirit theater to Texas Spirit Theater

Questions 14